how my writng improved in some ways

My writing has approved a lot since I have had writing assignments. Its been kind of easy for me to start some papers off but not most of them. I think of different writing methods that I can do before I write as in elaborating more than I usually do. I sometime have problems in I starting the topic off and ending it that hasn’t changed for me but I will soon learn how to do both. I like writing blogs every week because it helps me build my writing skills up and it also makes me think a little bit more on what I have to write. I improved in a lot of areas at first It took me along time to think about a topic but now it just takes a few minutes now. My mom enjoys my writing now she doesn’t tell me I should change things anymore. I still write better out of school because its allways been a place that I can sit and think as long as I wont to. My style of writning has changed a little I can include more details then usual. At first I didn’t really read in front of a audioence but know I do because its just the feedback I get know so then I will know what to change and what to keep the same. Im not saying it super easy to just start a paper off or ending a paper im saying im just improving in some areas of the writing process.

dont let anything get in your way

dont let anything stop you or get in your way stay on track and always do what you have to do to succeed. It might get hard but just keep on making it and doing what you have to do for yourself.Staying focused is always the key to success.

Letter of introduction

Jasmine Mcafee
8/31/09

Dear Ms. Stephanie,
My name is Jasmine Mcafee and I am a student of yours. I’m going to tell you about myself and my interests and what I like to do most of my time. I hope by me telling you this will allow you to know a little more about me then just being a name on your roster. I will also be telling you about my goals that I want to achieve while im in your class for this semester.
I have a lot of favorites such as movies. I like scary movies and comedy movies. I love watching all the Halloween movies that star Jason and any other movie that he stars in. My favorite foods are pizza, tacos, and nachos, and basically anything that’s good. Tacos from taco bell are the best but sometime tacos from home could be better. I make my own pizza instead of buying one from the store or odering one from papa johns or little ceseras.
Special memories I ever had when I where young and I went to all the carnivals and got on all the rides when we lived in Minnesota. The Mall of America is a very big mall they have rides restaurants and a lot of clothing stores. It’s the biggest mall in the united states I think. I will never forget it as long as I live I plan on moving back so it wont be a place to forget.
My family is amazing I love my family there wonderful people most of the time. My family that I currently live with consist of 3 brothers my mom and step dad. I have twin brothers there 10 yrs old and there very active one plays basketball for sterling and the other plays softball. I have another brother that’s 13 and he will be graduating from middle school this year. Im proud of him and I want him to graduate so he can go on to high school and college. My mom is a very nice lady we look so much alike they think we are twin sisters, its kind of funny because they always mistake me for her.
My dreams have always been to become somebody important and don’t never let anyone tell me other wise or what im not able to do. I also have a new dream its to become a very good mom. I know im young but this is a blessing to me because the doctor said I wouldn’t be able to have kids of my own so it’s a miracle.
My goals for this semester while im in your class is to pay attention and don’t let anything get in my way of doing my work. Maintain a A or B average while im in your class. My goals are very maintaining so I shouldn’t have any problems if so I know I can get help.
I hope by me writing this can let you know about me and what I would like to be and achieve.


Sincerely, Jasmine Mcafee

Blog Week #2

Writing a paper for my teacher is one of the hardest things for me. It also can be challenging if theres alot of requirments thats needed for that particular paper. Being at home is the best time for me to write a paper. I have time to think about what my topic is going to be. When i write at home i get less distrated and i also get alot more done and more on paper. I have a chance to sit and think about what im going to write next. The most diffcult time for me to write a paper is at school. I get distracted and cant concentrate as much because im worried about me not getting done and turned in when its due at the end of class. When i see other students getting done before me I start to panic and worry. I get stuck on a paper in school i began to rush myself and start to get off topic.
Writing can be fun depending on what type of writing it is. I could be a excellent writer at the most time if it intrest me. Free writing is more of my style because I can write about anything anddont feel like im getting rushed or getting off topic. Writing is very good for you but it can be very challenging and difficult at the same time.